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February 11
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As I live and breath your darkness,
I am haunted by your dark desires,
Blinded by your detestation,
I am your most beautiful ruin. 

In this beautiful ruin,
I will continue to exist,
Forever lamenting the loss 
of my sweet innocence.

And in the sorrow that I miss,
I will not rest in this fading light,
Finding the strength to save me,
I will never rest until I set it right.

The chains that haunt me forever binding,
So fragile in the ruins of a haunted passing,
All alone in the dark with no one to guide me,
Wishing to turn back the pages of this haunting tale.

Yet against all odds,
I will turn this into a fairy tale ending.
Originally written back in 2010, I decided to create text only version so there is no distraction between text and visuals.

See the original here:
Beautiful Ruin by Endorell-Taelos

This is a Chronicle of Loreithia, one of Luciana's poems.
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though I've not read the series, I really like this. :D It's lovely.
Thank you very much :aww: 
LadyBrookeCelebwen Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! :D
nightshade-keyblade Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I may not know the series very well, but I know poetry that I love when I read it :love:
:aww: Thank you very much! 
Gnewi Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You definitely have a way with words and poetry. I love how sad it is and yet how Luciana still shows her resilience, especially in the final lines. :love: She ends it with the determination to have good be the result of all her trials. I love it!
I try to. Poetry has never been my strong point. :giggle:  Thank you so very much for your praise! :love:
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