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Her hopes and dreams are frozen in time
Trapping the sadness that clouds her mind
The trust she had is no more
She longs for what did go before
Frozen tears shatter on dreary floors.

Memories into a million pieces.
They melt and are no more,
leaves a stain, a mark of pain 
and still the frozen tears fall.
Originally written back in 2010, I decided to create a text only version so there is no distraction between text and visuals.

See the original here:
Frozen in Time by Endorell-Taelos

This is a Chronicle of Loreithia, one of Luciana's poems.
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poem was featured in my Finding Feel Feature - Poetry  fayerin.deviantart.com/journal… :heart:
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Endorell-Taelos Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   General Artist
Ooooh, thank you so very much my dear! :huggle: 
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Fayerin Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:love: its a pleasure, i'm glad to know you are happy :aww:
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Gnewi Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful! I remember reading this before! :love: 

Poor Luciana.... I can feel her sadness when I read this.
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Endorell-Taelos Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014   General Artist
:sadnod: 

Thank you dear! :huggle:
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