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What started out as a couple of friends deciding to do a crossover story ended up turning into a huge adventure, for us as writers, as well as for our characters within the novella. A classic fantasy story with an urban twist, the story is mostly a sword & sorcery tale which appeals to a large audience. We are most proud of the characters and how their relationships develop through the course of the story. It's a great story and we hope you enjoy it.
For more commentary on the story, as well as the individual chapter, you can take a peek at the artist comments featured on the dA version.
1/23/13 - A year later, this novella has undergone a massive clean-up/edit. Collaborating was a wonderful experience, but during the initial writing, we were still new to working with each other and the edit process left a lot to be desire. Nevertheless, with the sequel set to begin soon, we felt it was best to give When Worlds Collide a good, hard edit and polish. We're both much happier with it now.
Feedback is always appreciated.
The Novella is now available for free to download as PDF (click download on this page), as well as eBook and Kindle formats on the Black Torrent (Relativity) website. You can see the download page here: blacktorrent.us/crossovers/whe…
If you would rather read it chapter by chapter on dA, you can visit the below link:
*** Luciana, related characters and Loreithia © Alicia Cooper -- Relativity and related characters are © Jim and Michelle Lehmann. -- This collaboration © Endorell-Taelos and mirz-alt -- Not for free use or anything else. Do not re-publish or claim as your own.***
For all things Relativity, check out the group.
Be sure to check out the world of Loreithia.
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"When a mysterious young girl shows up on the streets of Gale City, it leads to an perilous journey spanning two worlds to get the tiny princess back to her home. Character driven with plenty of adventure, the story is sure to please superhero fans and fantasy lovers alike."
Comments:
What started out as a couple of friends deciding to do a crossover story ended up turning into a huge adventure, for us as writers, as well as for our characters within the novella. A classic fantasy story with an urban twist, the story is mostly a sword & sorcery tale which appeals to a large audience. We are most proud of the characters and how their relationships develop through the course of the story. It's a great story and we hope you enjoy it.
For more commentary on the story, as well as the individual chapter, you can take a peek at the artist comments featured on the dA version.
1/23/13 - A year later, this novella has undergone a massive clean-up/edit. Collaborating was a wonderful experience, but during the initial writing, we were still new to working with each other and the edit process left a lot to be desire. Nevertheless, with the sequel set to begin soon, we felt it was best to give When Worlds Collide a good, hard edit and polish. We're both much happier with it now.
Feedback is always appreciated.
The Novella is now available for free to download as PDF (click download on this page), as well as eBook and Kindle formats on the Black Torrent (Relativity) website. You can see the download page here: blacktorrent.us/crossovers/whe…
If you would rather read it chapter by chapter on dA, you can visit the below link:
When Worlds Collide - Chapter 1 - Arrival
A strong wind blew in from the north. The Black Torrent shivered and pulled his cape around himself. For a late May evening, it was unseasonably cold. The change of weather had come on quite suddenly and it almost seemed there was something more in the air than a mere chill. Breaking into a run, he hoped the movement would warm him. He darted to the edge of the building and leapt over to the next rooftop. As his feet hit the slate, a buzzing came from his belt. He pulled out the small communicator, recognizing the code for Officer Derek Blake. He switched on the device.
"Torrent here."
"Hey, we were wondering if you could come down to Fifth and Clark. We have a kid here and we're not sure what to do with her."
Glancing at his watch, he grimaced. It was nearly 2 a.m. "I'm not covering that area tonight," he said, even though he was already heading to the location.
"I know. But...well, you'll see when you get here."
It took Torrent twenty minutes to m
*** Luciana, related characters and Loreithia © Alicia Cooper -- Relativity and related characters are © Jim and Michelle Lehmann. -- This collaboration © Endorell-Taelos and mirz-alt -- Not for free use or anything else. Do not re-publish or claim as your own.***
For all things Relativity, check out the group.
Be sure to check out the world of Loreithia.
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It's so refreshing to see writing like this!
This is really good and when I started I couldn't stop reading! It's been far too long since I've read a story I don't have to wince at because of the writing, so you did great! The writing is well done- from just the first 3 pages I could tell that there was a lot behind these characters. It also flows well, and seems natural/realistic. The characters are likeable seem like they could be real people. I hope to see more from this in the future, and I hope that you and your friends keep on writing!
Now I really want to learn more about the two respective worlds, haha. Time to check out the groups!
This is really good and when I started I couldn't stop reading! It's been far too long since I've read a story I don't have to wince at because of the writing, so you did great! The writing is well done- from just the first 3 pages I could tell that there was a lot behind these characters. It also flows well, and seems natural/realistic. The characters are likeable seem like they could be real people. I hope to see more from this in the future, and I hope that you and your friends keep on writing!
Now I really want to learn more about the two respective worlds, haha. Time to check out the groups!